Draft 1 Done; Now for Draft 2
Today I finished the first draft of the fifth book in my Show Me series. It runs 89,003 words. My two invaluable critique partners have been commenting on each chapter as I wrote draft 1. They notice every questionable word and comma, illogical behavior or plot twist, information dump or lack of clarity. I’ll probably cut about 2,000 words from draft 1 by weeding out paragraphs with unnecessary information, interactions with little point, jokes that don’t work, descriptions readers don’t need, and other distractions. A big concern on draft 2 is checking for consistency, particularly in descriptions of setting and … Continue reading →